Check out my vid
May 9, 2008, 04:41 PM
#1
My 1st video ever :)
Recently went driving and used my cellphone camera to make a video. I made the music myself 
Anyways, hope you guys enjoy.
http://videos.streetfire.net/video/E...-rd_160757.htm
btw, for the veteran video makers, some feedback would be nice. Thanks in advance.
Anyways, hope you guys enjoy.http://videos.streetfire.net/video/E...-rd_160757.htm
btw, for the veteran video makers, some feedback would be nice. Thanks in advance.
Last edited by asdfasdf128; May 9, 2008 at 04:44 PM.
May 9, 2008, 04:58 PM
#3
Ok, for being a camera phone, I have to say I was very impressed. From the look of the effects it looks like you used Sony Vegas or something like that to edit it.
Ok here are my very critical points towards your work, I hope I'm not being a dick.
I didn't like the old film look of the intro.
You should have stretched your fades a little more and made them slower
You should have slowed down the driving footage and made it somewhat slow-mo, it would have made the bumpiness of the vid go away a little bit.
There was no action really....
The music was good for self made definitely, but a little porno-ish.
http://media.putfile.com/TurboTrix20g
Here's one of the better videos that I did, but it looks crappy now that putfile puts TONS of ads and what not in their movies, it slowed down my video and made it choppy.
Ok here are my very critical points towards your work, I hope I'm not being a dick.
I didn't like the old film look of the intro.
You should have stretched your fades a little more and made them slower
You should have slowed down the driving footage and made it somewhat slow-mo, it would have made the bumpiness of the vid go away a little bit.
There was no action really....
The music was good for self made definitely, but a little porno-ish.
http://media.putfile.com/TurboTrix20g
Here's one of the better videos that I did, but it looks crappy now that putfile puts TONS of ads and what not in their movies, it slowed down my video and made it choppy.
May 9, 2008, 07:24 PM
#4
Ok, for being a camera phone, I have to say I was very impressed. From the look of the effects it looks like you used Sony Vegas or something like that to edit it.
Ok here are my very critical points towards your work, I hope I'm not being a dick.
I didn't like the old film look of the intro.
You should have stretched your fades a little more and made them slower
You should have slowed down the driving footage and made it somewhat slow-mo, it would have made the bumpiness of the vid go away a little bit.
There was no action really....
The music was good for self made definitely, but a little porno-ish.
http://media.putfile.com/TurboTrix20g
Here's one of the better videos that I did, but it looks crappy now that putfile puts TONS of ads and what not in their movies, it slowed down my video and made it choppy.
Ok here are my very critical points towards your work, I hope I'm not being a dick.
I didn't like the old film look of the intro.
You should have stretched your fades a little more and made them slower
You should have slowed down the driving footage and made it somewhat slow-mo, it would have made the bumpiness of the vid go away a little bit.
There was no action really....
The music was good for self made definitely, but a little porno-ish.
http://media.putfile.com/TurboTrix20g
Here's one of the better videos that I did, but it looks crappy now that putfile puts TONS of ads and what not in their movies, it slowed down my video and made it choppy.
May 9, 2008, 08:23 PM
#6
lol... i love twisties... but i hope there was a friend holding the camera phone, and you wernt driving through the corners with one hand on the wheel and one on the phone
next time use a mount, duct tape, glue, gum, something! that way you can be more focused on the road, and maybe take it faster to make it more interesting! but the road looks fun!
next time use a mount, duct tape, glue, gum, something! that way you can be more focused on the road, and maybe take it faster to make it more interesting! but the road looks fun!
